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Friday, May 20, 2016
GDDS2 - "Shifting Alliances" & "The Rise of ISIS"
Through the use of counterproductive tactics and strategies on both sides, both the rebels and current governments in the middle-east are perpetuating the very chaos, influences and instability they both seek to eliminate.
You've taken a strong position and your argument is clear. Avoid using the same word three times in one sentence (both) and capitalize "Middle East." Also specify which sides you are talking about - ISIS vs. who?
You've taken a strong position and your argument is clear. Avoid using the same word three times in one sentence (both) and capitalize "Middle East." Also specify which sides you are talking about - ISIS vs. who?
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