Friday, May 20, 2016

GDDS #1: "The Rise of ISIS" and "Future of Kurdistan"

The Kurd's yearn for an independent state is weakened by the Peshmerga fighting against ISIS; however, since the Kurds have made the most progress against ISIS, the western support of the Kurds can lead to a positive, global change concerning an independent Kurdistan which can then lead to the dissolution of ISIS.
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  1. jlfridayMay 20, 2016 at 12:20 PM

    Your on the right track but need to reword for clarity. Specifically, reconsider your use of the word "yearn" and try to consolidate your thesis so that you won't need to use a semi-colon.

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