The recent affairs inflicted upon the Middle East reveal that regime security in these two distant regions, the Koreas and Middle East, will begin to diminish with a complete transformation of the government with support from indigenous civilians and military, resulting in a unified Korea and stronger relation with the United Nations.
"Inflicted upon" implies that the peoples of the Middle East had no agency in the current situation. To which "regimes" are you referring? Who are the "indigenous civilians and military"? I can't identify your argument based on this statement. You will need to more clearly identify the topic and define your argument before proceeding. If you need help, please come in to see me.
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